La terrazza condivisa

When the residents were invited to suggest uses for the flat roof, a garden seemed the obvious choice. However, the engineer's report made it clear that large containers of soil would be too heavy. Some neighbors felt the proposal had been dismissed without a proper discussion, while others were relieved that safety had come first. At the next meeting, we agreed to separate the idea from the original design. Smaller plants could be placed along the edges, provided access to the roof remained clear. I wouldn't have supported the revised plan if it had simply ignored the concerns raised earlier. As it stood, though, it offered a way forward without pretending that every difficulty had disappeared. The committee will review the arrangement after the summer, when we have a better sense of how people use the space.

1. the engineers report → the engineer's report

   «the engineer's report»: Il rapporto o registro appartiene a un solo referente; il possessivo singolare si scrive con ’s.

2. to heavy → too heavy

   «too heavy»: Too indica eccesso davanti all’aggettivo; to non ha quella funzione.

3. had been dismiss → had been dismissed

   «had been dismissed»: In questa passiva, been è seguito dal participio in -ed, non dalla forma base.

4. the roofs remained clear → the roof remained clear

   «the roof remained clear»: Si parla di un’unica terrazza; roof è singolare e remained resta al passato.

5. wouldnt have supported → wouldn't have supported

   «wouldn't have supported»: L’apostrofo indica le lettere omesse nella contrazione; eliminarlo cambia la grafia.

6. a better sence → a better sense

   «a better sense»: Sense significa percezione o comprensione; si scrive con s, non c, in quella posizione.

Confronta separatamente parole ascoltate e ortografia. Non c’è un voto automatico. Si accetta una punteggiatura normativa diversa che conservi relazioni e senso; cambiare una virgola non implica una parola ascoltata male. Controlla poi maiuscole e segni diacritici con il modello.

Mantieni parole, ordine, articoli, preposizioni e desinenze. Non sostituire con sinonimi né sciogliere contrazioni. Le sei note sono esempi di revisione: confronta il testo intero, non soltanto quei sei punti. Sono incluse trascrizioni complete alternative in variantes_aceptadas: sono varianti scritte dello stesso messaggio, non sinonimi.

Apostrofi diritti e curvi sono equivalenti; conserva contrazioni e possessivi.

• When the residents were invited to suggest uses for the flat roof, a garden seemed the obvious choice. However, the engineer's report made it clear that large containers of soil would be too heavy. Some neighbours felt the proposal had been dismissed without a proper discussion, while others were relieved that safety had come first. At the next meeting, we agreed to separate the idea from the original design. Smaller plants could be placed along the edges, provided access to the roof remained clear. I wouldn't have supported the revised plan if it had simply ignored the concerns raised earlier. As it stood, though, it offered a way forward without pretending that every difficulty had disappeared. The committee will review the arrangement after the summer, when we have a better sense of how people use the space.